tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post7459990932952853406..comments2023-08-09T13:05:15.354-04:00Comments on Denny S. Bryce: Six Sentence Sunday and Denny's Eye Candy Week 19Denny S. Brycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13159554158362728407noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-80521213518931851672011-12-18T23:51:12.514-05:002011-12-18T23:51:12.514-05:00I like the zigzag, push-pull of opposing desires: ...I like the zigzag, push-pull of opposing desires: you don't grey it out to ambivalence. I'm curious about this character and her backstory, as well as what comes next. Past, present and future in six lines.. not bad.E. P. Beaumonthttp://epbeaumont.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-50932556593677102832011-12-11T19:39:52.732-05:002011-12-11T19:39:52.732-05:00Great capturing of how she feels.Great capturing of how she feels.Alixhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-18930059257357261382011-12-11T17:58:12.552-05:002011-12-11T17:58:12.552-05:00Great inner tension. I think she'll go.Great inner tension. I think she'll go.Tmonique Stephenshttp://www.tmoniquestephens.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-4141338953222206672011-12-11T14:52:41.649-05:002011-12-11T14:52:41.649-05:00Good portrayal of her conflict. Well done!Good portrayal of her conflict. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-51674940912284064942011-12-11T14:28:53.033-05:002011-12-11T14:28:53.033-05:00nice struggle with herself, could feel it...nice struggle with herself, could feel it...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-87701941783282327342011-12-11T13:02:50.286-05:002011-12-11T13:02:50.286-05:00decisions decisions ....decisions decisions ....suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7444496508428120415.post-67314684050036943212011-12-11T12:22:56.573-05:002011-12-11T12:22:56.573-05:00Love the give and take of her inner-battle. Sounds...Love the give and take of her inner-battle. Sounds like a fun read!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.com