Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday & Denny's Eye Candy - Week 16

Actor Alex O'Loughlin played a vampire on "Moonlight" a few years back, and was one of the inspirations for Gideon. Photo snagged from Internet by Denny S. Bryce

Six Sentence Sunday sure comes around fast. But I'm sticking with my current WIP for one last week...then we must move on:)...It's about a vampire FBI agent struggling to keep his promise to a witch.
Gideon gulped down his drink and walked over to the wall of windows. Stretching from corner to corner, floor to ceiling, they faced east, overlooking Lake Michigan. He loved watching the water strike the shoreline in the moonlight. The black waves surged with gray and white sprays that shot high into the air before vanishing into the night. He could see well in the dark, his eyesight keen in the shadows, too. And since the water at night was mostly shadows and white foam, he could watch the lake until dawn.
There it is! Now go and read more Six Sentence Sunday!


  1. Very peaceful scene. will be sorry to see him go

  2. Thanks Sue. He will be missed...from six sentence Sunday, but 85000 words in...I need to edit, and get him and the manuscript ready for trying to sell it:)'s hoping it gets published one day...I do appreciate u stopping by.

  3. and I loved him
    in moonlight. A good inspiration. The description here was really nice. good luck with the edits

  4. I remember a previous excerpt of this--good one! You built the setting here very nicely--almost felt the water spray myself. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in finding a publishing home for it!

  5. Great description...could easily picture it. Enjoyed your 6

  6. Lovely scene, beautiful visuals. I always look forward to reading your six! :-)

  7. Very vivid. I can picture the scene. I like that! ;)




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