Here's my contribution to Six Sentence Sunday from my YA paranormal WIP...no working title yet (there is, but I don't want to say just yet:)...It's a story about a sixteen year-old girl who grows up in a small town and then moves to a city on the ocean with her two aunts after her mother and brother are killed. This is the heroine's POV. Her name is Asia.
Read more SSS entries here.Do you understand time? How it quivers in and out and disappears and reappears? Consider how one time long ago, my mother wasn’t dead. How my brother used to laugh. How I never liked chocolate or the ocean. Time changes everything sooner or later and I just need to get a grip on how to deal with it.
Yes very true and well stated
ReplyDeleteAre you sure it's legal to put him in a YA? LOL! So glad you followed me today, or I wouldn't have seen your SIX. Nice! Colorful writing.
ReplyDeleteWell done, great snippet.
ReplyDeleteExcellent voice on her. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNice snippet, very poignant!
ReplyDeleteWow, Denny! That was awesome. I want to read that book! Thanks for sharing.
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ReplyDeleteSounds like she's railing against time and the changes that come with it.
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